Taking stock of your work...

How well do you think you told the story
~I think that i told the story rather well. I gave the reader enough information to get my point across.

What did you do especially well?
~I think that i used despcriptive writing well. I wrote it so that the reader could picture the setting and feel what i was feeling. I also think that i did my intro and conclusion well by starting at the end and then leaving my grade for the paper till the conclusion making the reader wanting to keep reading.

What could still be improved?
~i'm sure that there is alot that could be improved. I think my punctuation, like commas usage, could use improving.

How did you go about coming up with the ideas and generating text?
~To come up with ideas i just thought about the papers i had to write in the past that i thought was challenging and then i just wrote.

How did you go about drafting your narrative?
~I wanted to do something different so i put the conclusion in the introduction by discussing when i was getting the paper back. Then i wrote the body starting when we got the assignment and the troubles i had with writing the paper. Then in the conclusion i went back to when we were getting the paper back and the grade i got.

How did others' responses influence your writing?
~ I took those responses into careful consideration and use most of their opinions because if they thought a scentence didnt make sense or that i should discuss something a little more i fugured other people would think the same thing.

What would you do differently next time
~Next time i might plan and be a little more organized instead of just jumping into it and just start writing.